This is generally well cut, although some of the cuts feel a bit rushed, such as the twitching foot. I like not returning to Sharon but staying with Lenny after he crosses the courtyard. This cuts down the time of the sequence and moves it along well. It’s also effective to use the close up of Lenny asking if he can go now, and then cutting out wide to see his turn.
April 4th, 2011 on 5:51 pm
This is generally well cut, although some of the cuts feel a bit rushed, such as the twitching foot. I like not returning to Sharon but staying with Lenny after he crosses the courtyard. This cuts down the time of the sequence and moves it along well. It’s also effective to use the close up of Lenny asking if he can go now, and then cutting out wide to see his turn.