e.g 1
Black the images have no copy right ; no heading for each part of the eassay
Yellow a lot texts, that is a good thing to show how the student thinking of the network media and make use of it in their study in other areas.
Green : need to pay more attention to the citation of the pictures. And make it more clean organised.
e.g 2
Black This portfolio is too simple , and the images are not attractive.
Yellow The essay is divided into several parts , which makes it easier to read. And he put his own pictures, he own the copy right himself , that is good .
Green Better put more images as the background, that would make your blogs more interesting (because your links in your portfolio are quite funny).
Black The copy right of the pictures becomes a problem. And the quality of the pictures is not good.
Yellow The bibliography is clear . She put it in a separate page.
Green I think you need to work more on your images on the blog , considering the quality and the copy right issues.
e.g 4
Black This portfolio got too many texts, and the text body is massive and not clear .
Yellow The blog is a good work, because it has a lot of links , and interesting images
Green Try to make more tables to make the text clear and organized , also make more frames.
After this class , I am more clear about the later project by acknowledging others’ weakness and their good things. And by combine others’ works I can know my work even better, and more confident for the last project.
