This week we presented our video B . I am so happy that I saw every group has its growth.
And I am happy that we got many positive feedback and encouragements.
I think we are working well fine with the split scree and the storyline. haha~~ also those ideas are from me.
but we have some things that we need to improve:
1. facebook thing is not really clear to audience
—- maybe we need to have a close-up of the facebook page of the particular part for the audience .
like the girl should be clear seen on the guy’s facebook when his photograph displayed.
2.cut 20s down—– it is a little long, so we need to make our video a little shorter
3. music can last longer .
4.but our music does not really fit in the end.
Seth said that the Jazz part is where working , but we should use something else , which can bring more depth.
the sound of the camera,
click laptop—leads audience to watch one of the character coming up
background sounds of restaurant and street.
use music with lyrics
For other groups , I have some thoughts as below:
In Jim’s group. their animation is really interesting, and the using of stop motion is smart to show. And i like the feeling of the hand drawing, along with the figure. We can see the changes of the picture, from a bird then becomes into the Flinders st. And the motion is continuous —- train coming. It displays a girl living in Melbourne city without speaking , but a kind of telling us something in an abstract way. And it is not only black-white drawing, the red and yellow colours sometimes stand out .And they also change the perspective —zoom in and zoom out. It is a post-modern work
April’s group: I like the story and the beginning what they typed on the screen. But i think the “clock” does not work well , maybe they can repeat it at the end. and go back to the first scene to suggest that they actually met before. At the same time, a lot people think that the draft is better than their final one. However I think timeless is a beautiful poem , and it deserves a beautiful story.
Laura’s group: Their video is a little experimental . because they put their individual work together into one. I like the natural sound from the sea and the footsteps in the dark. It is quiet personal and poetic. But i think the previous of their individual one is not bad, and i think it is not clear to put them together without distinguishing between them.
Julianna’s group: I like the interaction between the projector and the character. but personally I prefer the previous version , maybe the emotion was strong in the previous one. likewise I like their video has a good representation of their poem.
In the end , i am quiet happy with our work and those suggestions that we have got. I am looking forward to see the better one after we improve it.
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